As I’ve mentioned a few times before, I’ve been going through my work in progress scene by scene. Each index card represents a scene. The challenge here is you’ll run short of scenes pretty quick. And then you start thinking about the scenes you have. Some of them are actually two scenes. There’s a traveling scene where something happens, and then another scene that depicts the arrival, where something happens. It’s easy to think of those two as one scene, because you have a ‘traveling arrival’ — but if the focal point of each is different. If there is a different dramatic build up and conclusion to both of those, then you have two scenes, not one.
So this is what I’ve been dealing with lately. I’m about 20 scenes short of completing my scene arrangement. But when I look at my list of scenes, I’ve pretty much captured everything I wanted. I can’t add a lot more without going into B.S. land. On closer examination, it appears that some of my scenes are actually two scenes. Which explains why my scene count is so low.
If you end up working this way, don’t be surprised if your scene count comes up short. You’ve probably got a few scenes hiding within other ones. Do a second pass evaluation, and any scenes that have a multi-focus should probably be split into two or more scenes. That fixes two problems; One, it keeps scenes focused on one dramatic problem at a time. Two, it broadens your scene count and fills out your story.





Creative consistency is an oxymoron. Creativity, by it’s definition, is not very often consistent. If it were consistent, it wouldn’t be valued so highly. If anyone could be creative, at any time, then what would be the value of creativity? Would it be valued?
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