Why the Extra Mile Pays Off
I pushed myself towards seventy scenes. I only need about sixty. I did it because I knew if I tried a little harder I would find a little bit extra material I didn’t think was there. More than that though… is how I feel this morning.
I’m at sixty seven scenes. And I don’t think I can make seventy. I could, but this morning it feels pointless. Any scene I create I will simply throw away. My story feels complete.
While on the surface I was aiming for the logical reason of generating a little extra material, I think in my gut I knew that forcing myself towards seventy scenes would make me hit a point where I knew deep down it was overkill. I wanted to reach that point.
Why?
Because there’s always that uneasy feeling when you’re trying to do something new, and evaluate whether that new process or method was effective. I wasn’t sure if I had milked it for all it was worth.
Last night I tried to insert one of my ‘extra’ scenes and it didn’t work. It was something, ideally, to be placed at the beginning of the story. The problem is the beginning of my story is really tight in how it introduces the hero and the villain, and there just isn’t any room there to disrupt the flow and go off on tangents. Other extra scenes have inserted just fine. But now my story is pregnant. I’ve got more scenes than I really need and things feel really full. Why keep feeding my story?
It feels right, and I feel like I’m wasting my time to add more. I was waiting for that gut reaction more than anything, and I’ve got it.
You know what that means. It means my scenes are ready to be written in prose!
Let the fun begin.
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June 29th, 2007 at 3:51 pm
Go Eric Go!
June 29th, 2007 at 5:59 pm
Thanks for the encouragement, Nienke.
I got my first page in this morning before I had to quit. Working from the scene treatments is a huge help. It’s a perfect road map. I don’t have to struggle over what to write, it’s all there in front of me. All I really have to do is expand and add detail, and put everything in 3rd person past tense.
The fun begins!