I’m working on a part of my story where I wanted a betrayal to take place. The betrayal is being committed by a secondary character. I didn’t like that the character was introduced in the very scene where the betrayal occurs. That makes it somewhat… arbitrary?
Betrayal seems like it would be a more powerful meme if it’s coming from a character you care about. Even if the character is not completely endeared to the reader, the character should at least one that you’re somewhat familiar with.





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